The Dawn Chorus
You're awake now
Devil-may-care you may seem
Lackadaisical you may be
Still it's venez m'aider that your acquiesce heart shrieks
Abashed with your body
You seek a mirror in clandestine
Trying your best to decipher your dreams
Finally, it's still gonna be deus ex machina for you
Unexpectedly, you remember the time you tried to jilt
You lied through your teeth about your feelings
The crux was a contingency to your lover
Causing unnecessary confutes which were contemptible in fact
The blitzkrieg was an obvious failure
Carte blanche wasn't what you truly desired
Because chastity was everything to you before
Or would you deplore it instead today
Maudlin isn't a form of cuss at all
Now all that's left is regret of the coup de grace dealt
Your ardour has always beaten your animus
It has and always will do it ad infinitum
Today you're gonna be a better person
Your adroit and affable self will help you
With alacrity you demolish your acrimony
Then realise your heart is wide open today
Your memories will carry on no matter what
Someone might witness happiness as you've truly awakened
Au revoir your heart waves to those mistakes you made
Till it's finally able to listen to the dawn chorus
-Roshann-
P/s: Consider using a dictionary or any other method possible to figure out the meanings of the words & phrases. Pretty much helpful as they're all valid English words. And no, I don't do these poem things. This is the only one I've ever done. You give me something.
Learning is like rowing upstream: not to advance is to drop back.
It's a great post/poem
ReplyDeleteA lot of hard work put in; evident from the spectacular use of words and/or phrases...
While I think that there is not a clear guideline or rules in writing a poem, try not to go overboard with using too many bombastic words. Well, it is crucial to make the poem look interesting and all, but don't get overboard with it...
Sometimes, the message is even more powerful when you Keep It Short and Simple.
However, this is just my earnest response to it. Might or might not reflect the truth. Overall, a job well done
weyh..bangga aku sial!!
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tks
dude,u ve got wat it takes to leave an impact on the world around you.. choose ur path wisely. stay away from swaying roads. i trust n believe with the right path, u will succeed in life.. i mean wat i say - youre a young man with a great mind-..
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-szeyue_SCTMC-
I would consider this as something great from you. It's obvious that you have put much effort in the poem. It could be better if you have included simplicity in our poem. Not too much on those bombastic words will make your poem a better one :)It's a great poem though. Well done, Roshann!
ReplyDeleteCONGRATULATIONS! ;) *hugs*
ReplyDelete... WOW... i am just... MEsmerized...
ReplyDeletehere's a confession.i need a friggin international dictionary.tahniah atas fikiran yang kritis dan kreatif.guess u achived kbkk?i shud stop crappin now.good work.
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This is amazing!! haha yes I do need a dictionary. Great work!
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